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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like!! Much goodness!!
person MewMew2
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating once more. I thoroughly enjoyed the intensity of this chapter and the Harry's epic explosion into action. I noticed that in either this chapter or the last you said in one line "Potter wondered how the boy, his son was doing" when it should have been "Snape wondered". Not trying to nitpick, just picked up on it. Excellent job, I eagerly await the next installment.
person tiggator
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story (like so many others you have written). Keep up the great work. Very clever plot. :)
person Mia
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO very overwhelming. I kind of wonder just what it would take for Harry to accept the truth about Snape. He was much more accepting of Black. I am as in love with this story as ever. Always wanting more. Makes me feel like I have something akin to an eating dissorder with how much I want to devour this.

~Mia
person k lave demo
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mmm you're right my emotions are still in knots and it's just as agonizingly delicious as before. this plot has got thrills going down my spine and the simmering curiosity has flamed into a agonizingly delicious desperation to KNOW what's going to hapeen next. seriosuly the anticipation has got my body twitching almost like someone who is expecting to go into battle soon. the characters and they're emotions were so well though out and the interaction between them and how harry saw how his actions were affecting draco lowered his defenses. those very same defenses that keep sev out may be lowered enough for him to stat making their relationship progress forwards. i feel so bad for severus though but i wonder f letting someone else run interference will really help. sincerely looking forward to a tongue thrashing from sev towards albu. he so deserves it this time. thank you for the pleasurable read. viven la vida...
person mucunagos
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!
Well... let`s just say I will feel sorry for Dumbledore when Severus confronts him.
NOT AT ALL!
Plenty of chocolate cookies for the inspired writer.
Mia
person mucunagos
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
P.S.
Am I the only one that thinks it`s all right for H to be stubborn and independent considering the circumstances?
I feel sooo lonely...
person heyyou
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Help! Help! I've been hooked by Lomonaaeren and I can't get away. It's so pretty and hypnotic, though...Do I want to escape from this entrancing storyteller's grasp? Hmmm...I think I like it here...so much to keep one entertained...
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 22!!!
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Snape may have gotten his answers, but at what cost? He just set back the trust factor for both himself and Draco. Now Harry's going to reject both of them. Completely.

You know, for all his careful, patient maneuvering and intelligence, Snape can be a real short-sighted and impatient idiot sometimes.


Keep up the great work!