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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person Anony
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What happend to the bloodline curse? It was acting up a lot a few chapters back, then it just stopped. Did I miss something, or is that later on in the story?
person Mia
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can only shake my head at Dumbledore. I can't even hate him. Well, maybe if I tried. I do love seeing him notched and bruised though. Severus, though...him I want to buy a beer for. He was amazing. I love it all. Thank you love. Thank you.

Will Draco and Harry become physically involved in this story?

~Mia
person Mia
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Because of your answer to me at the end of chapter 23, I realised that you have two reviewers named Mia. Odd, that. I'm the one that puts the stupid squiggle before my name. Mostly I praise and don't leave much in the way of questions. I'll be sure to differentiate for you now.

~ the other Mia
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 24!!! It's a start! I like how Harry was able to fall asleep with Severus guarding him and how Severus was hoarding his secrets of Harry.
person SP777
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me if my thoughts seem scattered [than usual], I was
watching the Jackson 5 special for 40 mins. before I came
back to review..
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about #22...

'A Conversation Harry Doesn't WANT to Have..' now THAT'S an
understatement!

Though I have to admit the image of strangulation of one
Saviour is having more and more of appeal to me...and the
restraint Severus is showing is commendable.

I'd give him an Order of Merlin just for that!

Now, you gotta admit that Harry seems to have slipped into
a dimension of his own making, I almost expect him to start
banging his head against a wall at any given moment, when he
gets into the same vicinity with Severus and TRIES to divert
his attention from the main subject.

I hope you give us a breakthrough soon! I'm starting to get
nervous about Harry's mental state.

By the way, how do you keep these 2 stories separate in your head?
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 23!!! Severus is going to rip Albus a new one!
person LoveLee
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've read a couple of your stories now and love the way you write your characters. You have this beautiful ability to transform your characters from the beginning to the end of the story, andI find each of your characters very easy to connect to as a reader.
This is another amazing piece of work, I look forward to the updates.
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont know why but I have the feeling that by the time Harry lets Snape into his life it will be too late and one of them will be dead morel than likely Snape. I understand why Harry is so reluctent to let Snape in, I guess the mushy part of me hates to see people struggle lol. Anyways great chapter.
person mucunagos
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, that was intense...Do not concur with Severus :things could have gone worse. I don`t know what would have happened in the heat of the battle without Draco.
Well at least the confrontation allowed Harry to blow off some steam. It`s only so much one can endure without exploding.
Both him and Severus need a reality check in considering each other, and Draco will fill the paper of the proverbial bridge. Lucky him!