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about #24...

I just had a 'moment' when I read this..or should I say a
thought JUST came to me! :-D

How about this for a scene...Severus is instructing Harry
in whatever situation you may have them in and Harry does
something that's COMPLETELY makes Severus exasperated and
THE words come out of his mouth, "You're just like your mother!"

...which, of course, pleases Harry to no end!

I don't know about you, but I got that a couple of times from
my mother. It's like a Universal phrase that a parent HAS to
say at one point or another.

Also, I like the fact that Severus IS trying with Harry, NOW
if only Harry will let his guard down an inch or two.

poor harry. he shouldnt have to suffer anymore. having snape as a father makes that impossible. harrys right he is the adult.

yes progress. especially emjoying how sev notices things bout harry that relate back to him and lily. do you think that if harry and sev had started towards a better relationship before harry found out about his parentage that he might have been more welcoming of the idea or withdraw out of fear of losing the new less hostile relationship? will severus pick up on the strength of emotions between the two boys before they do? as always i love the plot and mosochistically enjoy the knot of emotions caused by your danged cliffhangers. happily awaiting the next update. viven la vida loca!

"Severus restrained his wrath with the ease of long experience

Aw that last scene made me squirm in my seat, it was so uncomfortable for poor Harry!! Very well done!

Also, loved the war of words with Sev & Albus.

great job!

Excellent chapter. This is like the turning point for their whole relationship.

At the end of every chapter I think that you can't get better than this, and can't make the emotions more real, or that you are about to fall into some cliche or overused situation. I am wrong every time. This is the most creative and inventive HP story I have ever read. You bring the characters to logical and in character places that I've never seen anyone else do, and I just have to wonder WHY no one else has thought of it, cause it makes so much sense. Okay, I think that I am done fangirling all over you.

about #23...

1. Damn, when Severus gets through speaking, his words leave you
cut open with LOTS of wounds, doesn't he? :-)

2.