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December 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how you had her help harry. The kitten story was very well planned out.
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The more Harry reveals, the more comes spilling out. Its like opening the flood gates.
Keep up the great work.
Keep up the great work.
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very deep and beautiful.
I find myself thinking from Snape's perspective in this story, which is odd for me. I was just as surprised as he was that Harry didn't consider him someone to check with regarding who to tell what to.
I'd really like to see how Dumbledore reacts to Harry now that Snape has given him a firm kick in the rear.
I find myself thinking from Snape's perspective in this story, which is odd for me. I was just as surprised as he was that Harry didn't consider him someone to check with regarding who to tell what to.
I'd really like to see how Dumbledore reacts to Harry now that Snape has given him a firm kick in the rear.
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #25.....
You know, I'm starting to like the fact Severus is truly
seeing Harry as 'his SON'.
So how long will it be until Harry sees Severus as 'his father'?
In canon, is Severus' father dead? I can't remember.
You know, I'm starting to like the fact Severus is truly
seeing Harry as 'his SON'.
So how long will it be until Harry sees Severus as 'his father'?
In canon, is Severus' father dead? I can't remember.
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
is NArcissa a fav character of yours? u seem to write her favorably or less critically then the other characters. as always enjoyed this update. i feel bad for harry and severus because neither are really sure of what a family acts like and that really isn't helping them. that contentment is still lingering. please never stop writing. til next time. viva la vida!
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Indeed it is, please think on it. Excellent job on this chapter as well, please update again when you can.
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo can't wait for chapter 26!!! Poor Severus. He is trying!
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December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I was getting somewhat irritated at this story because everyone expected Harry to change his attitude and outlook but neither Snape nor Draco were changing theirs. I'm glad that Harry confronted Snape about his attitude and how it needed to change. How can Snape expect Harry to think of him as family if he still looks at Harry with derision and contempt? Who would want to be around that?
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job. I throughly enjoyed the mental image invoked when this line was read "And as the boy leaned closer, Severus suffered a sudden, dizzying revelation: he was leaning over a potions cauldron and instructing a son of his blood." This could be used to prompt a drabble/one-shot based on the Concept of Serverus' son perhaps? Just a thought. Thank you for updating once more.
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 25!!!