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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person polka dot
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do think Draco's going to have to spell it out for poor Harry cause he just doesn't get it.
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 29!!! You totally blew me away with this chapter!!!! I love the interaction with Draco and Severus! Both had a turning point! Harry is starting to realize he treats Draco differently. Okay so he hasn't quite realized he has feelings for him but it's a start! And his relationship with Severus has gotten better! Oh tooooo wonderful!!!
person k lave demo
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
u have too much fun writing those cliffhangers especially the ones that leave a strong impact. it's cruel to tease your readers. anyways i sincerely enjoyed that first real mending of the fence. before was like setting up the tools to do so and now they've managed to put up a few of the new boards. both of them are still stubborn idiots though. i never said severus WOULD be a GOOD father just that he would make a good awkward father. still its encouraging that severus found a link to harry and it was positively, delectably evil of draco to let harry figure that one out. i'm with draco on this one. of course i always enjoy what you write. til next time. viva la vida.
person SP777
schedule January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #28...

You know, with all these 'father-son' interactions, you're
slooowly turning me into a sap. :-( Lord help me if you decide
to do a...tender moment.

I think I'll just find myself a corner...and sulk.
person LeSang
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good grief, you've had me absolutely sobbing my heart out! I am really enjoying this fic! It's everything I hate, whatnwith the Snape = dad thing, and yet I still love it. I can't wait to read more, I really hope that there is an update soon!!
person polka dot
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like Draco's comments, they seem well thought out not just a minor threat but a I've got it all figured out kind of threat.
person Mia
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My goodness. I just want to carress this chapter. It gave me warm fuzzies. Thank you.

~The other Mia
person Al
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well! This fic is very good. If I were Harry a even could accept Snape been my father, but, I couldn't change the surname Potter to Snape. James loved Harry and Harry know that and because of it i can't see him give up the name Potter. By the way, when Harry and Draco will finally revel their feelings? It is going so slow. By! By!
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would it be silly of me to get my hopes up and believe Harry might actually be coming around to the idea that Severus wouldnt be such a bad father?
person MewMew2
schedule December 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Breakthrough I suppose would be a word to describe the plot development of this chapter. Please continue to update when possible, I eagerly await your next update.