rate_review Reviews

Nicely done! I highly enjoyed the way you described the battle between the personification of the Dark Lord's spirit in the Horcurx and Harry: favorite scene so far. Please update once more when you have the chance, excellent job!

about #29...

1. How ironic, I was going to ask you how Severus would have felt
if he heard about the tale of how Harry fought the basilisk and
saw the corpse for himself...how proud he would feel AND would
you use that as a scene in the future.

But, you used that scenario with the others.

2. What's a Jarvey???

3. The battle swelled and surged, fell and broke back in a storm
of petals and fathers

okay, I gotta say something, but your 'fathers' is missing an E. It's
towards the end of the chapter. :-)

4. All in all, I like the direction you are taking this story, also
will we be seeing more action now? I didn't realize how much I missed it
until I read this chapter.


PS- I have this scenario I want to 'throw' your way, are you willing
to see what I came up with THIS time? :-)

happy purring kitty and myself enjoyed the fight

Thanks. I understand that i don't always word things the best way. I admit that most of them aren't cliffhangers but when you're enjoying a story and find out you have to stop at a certain point til you can read it again it ends up feeling like a cliffhanger. Honestly,that last chapter had so much impact it felt like you stopped there on purpose. Your stories are that good. Anyways, enjoyed this chapter. Poor Sev. It's never easy to just stand back and watch ones child live their life. Finally, Harry has someone who doesn't harp on him all the time. Hermione and Ron rarely seem to understand that Harry just wants support sometimes without questions or going through a full scale interrogation. Interrogations in particular are very annoying. Til the next update. Viva la vida!

I soooo soooo need chapter 30!!!

I love how you have them understanding each other a little bit it is a great start for their father son relationship. I love this story I look forward to readding more of your work.

"..and Severus

Wow. Powerful chapter.

Keep up the fantastic work.

I really liked this chapter. The emotions and feelings pouring out on the page from pretty much everyone was superb. I truly loved that part where Draco had gently touched Harry's face. And then the scene where Harry was telling Snape about being in control of his secrets. Wow. Really good. Cannot wait for more. Truly love this story. :)

awesome story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter! ... and omg i cant wait till harry admits to his feelings *giggles like a school girl* make it happen soon plz!