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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
#31...

Okay, I'm reading it..and seeing it. Harry HAS accepted Severus
as his father, he just hasn't realized it conciously yet. Everything
seems to be a 'maybe' & 'possibly' with him right now.

..and once again, I'm loving the father/son interaction! I almost
feel we should at LEAST see a hug from the both of them once
the story winds down.

Well, for Severus' sake at least...
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 31!!!
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I understand how they feel harry and albus but if it was me I would care I would probable do what I could and then save myself or if itwas my child save my child and skrew the world.. What would you do if it was yourself or your child on the line?
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering that when hermonie cast the horcrux spell would it not effect harry just as it effected the tiara?
person racheldr
schedule January 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know this didn't happen in the book, and it may have absolutely nothing to do with the rest of your fiction (which i love so far by the way!) but Harry did have basilisk poisoning in second year, couldn't this have done something while he was unconscious?
person polka dot
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do think Dumbledore's getting off a little easy but there's really not a punishment for being ready to kill someone. I do think Harry should tell Hermione and Ron so he can get a someone to deal with Dumbledore in his stead.
person SP777
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #30....

1. Boy, that's some cold-heartedness right thar'...I don't care HOW much
you would have grieved, you would have killed me anyway???

Man, we would have fought like cats in that room! How would YOU
have responded?

2.Well, you can send it my way, but I really can
person k lave demo
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sigh... depressing update. i can see both harry's and dumbledores's point of view but dumbledore's way of going about it still wasn't right. and essentially i don't think anyone should be given up like a lamb to the slaughter unless there is truly no other way and then the person has to decide for themselves. others have no right to make the decision for them. also i really enjoy the progress being made with the relationships. i can't say this enough but i really enjoy the play of emotions, interactions and revelations that occur with your interpretation of the characters. the way you write it almost seems as if this might be the truly reality or a very possible alternative. your stories will always be enjoyable because of that. congrats u have successfully turned me to harry/draco though i still have a strong prefernce for harry/snape. til next time. chao!
person MewMew2
schedule January 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. Forgiveness for that sort of situation would certainly be a difficult thing to think about possible giving. You did an excellent job in portraying this aspect of Harry's ever changing relationship with Dumbledoor and the role he has in Harry's life. Thank you for updating once more.
person Sneakyfox
schedule January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was the craziest battle scene ever! Well done!