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February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww...i love this. the perfect mix of drama and love. i can't wait until you update!
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic.
But you say Snape has not connected the idea of the Sectumsempra with the book, but after the battle with Bellatrix, you wrote that he recognized his spell and the possibility that Harry has his old book... Or maybe I'm just imagining things.
Anyway, I love this fic. Update soon!
But you say Snape has not connected the idea of the Sectumsempra with the book, but after the battle with Bellatrix, you wrote that he recognized his spell and the possibility that Harry has his old book... Or maybe I'm just imagining things.
Anyway, I love this fic. Update soon!
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Indeed and really who but Harry has any commitment to Draco's life. He's not good at making friends (I sympathize)
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 39 soon ^_^
Jan
Jan
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #38...
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Once again, spectacular.... Yes, Dumbledores web of secrets IS very frusterating... I guess we'll just have to wait and see what he has got up his sleeve! Do we know how many more chapters there may be, and if there is a sequel?
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February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I loved the great father-son moment there while brewing potions.
Fantastic. Keep up the great work!
Fantastic. Keep up the great work!
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bah! Im on Draco's side... sick of all of Dumbledores puzzle's... although I suppose if he said it all strait out, we wouldnt have much of a story would we... Still, its frusterating. lol
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February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hai... so happy. i've finally pegged one of the reasons i like ur writing. it's the comparisons you make on the characters actions. their so well done but it's written so casually that you kind of take it for granted. they're also very believable so people don't really question it. anyways i really like them. i loved how you used the potions brewing to show both of their conflicts and desires. also you can tell they both managed to jump a big hurdle and are now more open to each other. seriously, i want to steal ur writing skills. not that mine are bad but yours would help so much. til next time. viva la vida!
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January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice way to boost Harry's confidence in the end, Sev.
Also, its the funniest thing. I love the fact that you write review replies, but sometimes I just want to respond to what you have to say, but can't quite remember what exactly it is I had said in the first place. lol. AFF.net is definitely not the place for conversations. But from what I remember I had said about Snape (you can just scroll up when reading this, I'm just winging it for now, heh) I think he just has a tendency to over analyze his hand. A side effect from too many years playing spy I suppose, but in the last chapter, Snape kind of thought too hard about what he was going to say and played it safe. You're right in that he was doing so well at first.. but he flubbed it all up in the end and sent Harry running out of the room. In this chapter, he was a lot more honest and upfront with Harry. He wanted Harry's assistance and succeeded.
Anyway, keep up the great work. Until the next update! :D
Also, its the funniest thing. I love the fact that you write review replies, but sometimes I just want to respond to what you have to say, but can't quite remember what exactly it is I had said in the first place. lol. AFF.net is definitely not the place for conversations. But from what I remember I had said about Snape (you can just scroll up when reading this, I'm just winging it for now, heh) I think he just has a tendency to over analyze his hand. A side effect from too many years playing spy I suppose, but in the last chapter, Snape kind of thought too hard about what he was going to say and played it safe. You're right in that he was doing so well at first.. but he flubbed it all up in the end and sent Harry running out of the room. In this chapter, he was a lot more honest and upfront with Harry. He wanted Harry's assistance and succeeded.
Anyway, keep up the great work. Until the next update! :D