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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person SP777
schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #40..

1. You turned Prof. Snape into your own personal Sherlock
Holmes! I liked it! ^__^

It's not all the time you see him being active behind
the scenes, people just usually put in the classroom,
the lab OR Dumbledore's office, then he's through for
the day.

I'm glad to see him 'stretch' his muscles, so to speak.

2. By the way, do betas help you with the stories now?
person polka dot
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry Snape, but I gotta root for the girls
person DTDY
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, now if she really did it or not.

I liked how you ended it with the comment of him wanting to hug harry. You worded it wonderfully.
person k lave demo
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well, i was right on most of them anyways. honestly didn't expect you to come to a resolution so soon. dumbledore's pretty much lost any hold on harry hasn't he? i think snape will very much appreciate that harry came to him. the situation with ron and hermione feels like someone trying to pull a tooth that isn't quite ready to come out. very painful and annoying but at least they're making progress. til next time! ciao!
person yuiop
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is cool!
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
40!!!! I sooooo sooooo need chapter 40!!!! OMG!!! I'm hooked!!!
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo need chapter 39!!!
person k lave demo
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
way to backtrack sev. can i throttle ron n hermione? please? they can be so unhelpful and limiting at the worst times. not always but... mmmm.... just making a guess but i don't think the culprit is blaise or greengrass. goyle is a maye not. it could possibly be noir? but i'm inclined to think the culprit might be outside of the house this time. let me know if any of my guesses are on the mark please? anyways curious about what may happen next. enjoyed this chapter. til next time. ciao!
person polka dot
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It would likely be Blaise, here's hoping it's a surprise evil teen.
person puck
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is the most absorbing story I've read since the books themselves. Wonderfully done. :)