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That was intense... Horribly, terribly, wonderfully intense. I love this whole chapter! I love Ron and Hermione and how they interacted through the chapter, I adore Draco and his Slytherin loyalty to Harry and Snape, but the scene where Snape carries Harry off was... Amazing? Fantastic? Brilliant? Good grief, I don't have words... I can't wait for the next chapter, you are amazing! Thank you

about #41...

Sooo...I was kinda hoping to 'see' what emotion Severus accidently
displayed, but if you WANT to leave it up in the air....

You know Harry's conversation with his father was reminiscent of a
child wanting approval from...their parent, of course. I think Harry
has accepted Snape more than he realizes. Now, if only he'll just
say that 6-letter word. F-A-T-H-E-R...

It felt like it happened a little too quickly like Harry was going to suffer for hours but only ended up suffering for a few minutes. Not that I'm a sadist or anything.

heh. unexpected humor at the end there. thank goodness that's over with. i'm assuming that ron and mione's opposition will have lessened greatly. i don't expect it to go away fully because i don't think they are willing to truly tolerate draco's presence. i don't think the acceptance part will come til later. loved this installment and am looking forward to the next chapter. i'm so glad severus finally got past his hesitation on acting like a father. til next time. viva la vida!

Did Harry loose his glamour along with the Horcrux, or was it Snapes reaction to Harry's pain that made them see the reality for what it was?

Anyway, keep up the great work! Looking forward to your next update!

I really like the way you have slowly built the father/son relationship.

Excellent, truely excellent !!

more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! Great chapters!!!

Sorry I missed an update, but damn, it only met I got to enjoy twice as much.
There's too much craziness going on in these chapters for me to pick one thing to comment on.

Keep up the great work!

It took me a few days to read the whole story so far, but I'm very glad I did :) I usually steer clear from Draco/Harry romances, they tend to be all the same and it's always hard to believe their motivations for getting together, but it was such a relief to see something so fresh and different! I very much admire the way you've taken time to show they're relationship building over time from distrust to love, offering plausible reasons along the way too, it was quite believeable and very in-character. Your plot is quite complex too and works very well in the scheme of the series. I did think Severus was a little out of character at times, there were a couple of points I thought he may have reacted differently, but I think you portrayed him for the most part - along with other characters - very accurately. It was a joy to read :)