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for Never Mine

by RynStar15

schedule July 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sequel?!!!! Oh hell! But yay too! And poor Draco and Hermione both. :( SP

schedule June 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 16 - Yay for Hermione taking on Bellatrix! And there BETTER be a happy (I'll accept happyish) ending. SP

schedule June 30, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch17 - Okay, was not expecting that final sentence. Still holding out for Hermione to sort this all out somehow. (Oh, and minor mistake in this chapter: "But I cannot, with a clear conscious," you meant conscience, right?) SP

schedule June 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

So I've been reading on this website for months now and your story made me actually sign up so I could send you a big thank you for writing this! I absolutely love it! And yes, I did guess about Malfoy being the last Horcrux. Love your evil writing, but still my heart hopes for a little bit of a happy end for our two lovebirds.. 

Love from Holland xoxox

 

schedule June 18, 2017 at 12:00 AM

No flattery, I tell it like it is! And yes, I had worked it out. Rememeber in a review I said I had had an idea but didn't want to say anything in case I spoiled a plot point? Whatever chapter that review was after was when I figured it out.

Anyway, in an angst filled chapter I did smile at Dobby's comment that Mr Harry Potter had told him not to say who the tray had come from. Looking forward to more, and to, of course, there being a happy ending. There IS going to be a happy ending, right?! SP

schedule June 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ok, now you're just fucking with me! You have lovely sweet smutty sex and then Draco flips on a penny and goes psycho! I trust that it is plot related, not evil-writer related, but come on!

Oh, and just wanted to say that "The days flew by as if the howling wind outside was snatching it away." was one of the most beautiful sentences I've ever seen. SP

schedule June 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh the feelings!  My heart is breaking a bit right now and I'm teary-eyed.  BTW nice, steamy scene. 

schedule June 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 13 - Liking. And I'd never considered that Ron was as prejudiced in his way as the Malfoys are in theirs; but yeah, absolutely agreed with everything said to him!

I'm worried about ... well, pretty much everyone but that is what you're going for, I guess, so good job.

And I enjoyed the little dig at DH about not wanting to be bouncing around the country looking for horcruxes! SP

schedule June 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 12 - you said "Hopefully this soothed your anxiety a bit!" How could this chapter soothe anxiety?! Argh, you are driving me mad. But yay for finally getting some smut! SP

schedule June 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Just when I think Draco is going to start opening up he pulls back. GRRR! I can only imagine how frustrating it is for Hermione. More please! SP