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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. I would love to know how Draco is going to resolve this.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome and interesting start. Although, I do hope that future chapters are longer than the first. It's hard for me to stay interested in a story when the updates are so short. I'll prolly end up waiting for several chapters to be posted and then read. That's just my personal preference.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very interesting beginning! I'm looking forward to reading more :)
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good strong start, you set the scene in very few words. Can't wait for chapter 2.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! First rate beginning! I'm so intrigued!! ^_^
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Please update soon. I look forward to it! =^-^=
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far keep it up and with longer chapters please :)
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's not often a story snags me on the first chapter, but your did! I'm very interested to see how the story progresses from here. Please update soon!
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning! You sound like a wonderful writer so far. I hope to see more soon!