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January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Unusual tale, I'm very interested to see where it would lead?
I enjoyed the contrasts, I hope to learn more when you continue, if you would?
M
I enjoyed the contrasts, I hope to learn more when you continue, if you would?
M
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January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.
Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097
Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.
Thank you for your cooperation.
Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097
Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.
Thank you for your cooperation.
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December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, hooks reader really well. Easy to read and leaves me wanting to read more!!!
Update soon!!
Update soon!!
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July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just love it so far!
Please continue! This Story has a lot of potential!!!
Please continue! This Story has a lot of potential!!!
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Great story so far. You really express their feelings vividly! I hope you plan to continue this story beyond just the few chapters posted.
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters! I really hope you continue!
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You want a review?
:) Okay then :P
I really do like what you've done with your story so far.. I love that you're showing a side of Luna that we never really get to see in the HP books.. I believe that she has a lot of potential if the right person would let her out.. And I think you're doing a wonderful job of showing her inner turmoil.
I'm not going to write what I've guessed, in case I'm wrong, but also because I want to see what you throw out there instead of what my strange brain comes up with.
I really hope you continue with it :)
Cheers,
Danni
:) Okay then :P
I really do like what you've done with your story so far.. I love that you're showing a side of Luna that we never really get to see in the HP books.. I believe that she has a lot of potential if the right person would let her out.. And I think you're doing a wonderful job of showing her inner turmoil.
I'm not going to write what I've guessed, in case I'm wrong, but also because I want to see what you throw out there instead of what my strange brain comes up with.
I really hope you continue with it :)
Cheers,
Danni