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by BellaNoir23

person Anon
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Helaine! Though I like Fiona too.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story. I like it.

The name I choose is Genevieve. I think that it fits her a lot better than the other names.
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work, update soon.

MPF
person mjd
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm I really couldn't decide on a name. Other then the chapter being short :) I emjoyed it, I am curious on what kind of revenge Harry will have on Draco and shouldn't there be talk of expelling Draco since it was such a spell that had permanent effects?
person Selera
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the name thing! no Harriette.

Anyways my choice would be number 4, Helaine. I don't like 3 as it makes me think of Ginny. 1 just i don't know it doesn't seem right for Harry... and 2 well makes me think of valentines day and really that day is a headache.

Great story still so keep it up.
person VertPin
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find there is too much girl name in -a.

I'm french, so please don't take Genevieve. It make me think of "genevieve de fontenay" and it is very frightening (take a look in google).

So Helaine may be the good one! English isn't my native language, so how do you pronounce Helaine? Like Helene in Greek mythology?
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Hopeing for a lot more
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yihaah, bring Tom along :D
person Selera
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'll say one thing.. don't stick with a female Harry derivative.. i would like to see something a bit more creative.
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOT Harriette! Maybe Hanna? Jamie (a play on James)?