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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Logical and to the point, LOL. That's our Sev.
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like where this is going so far. needs a little more feeling to it. being able to feel the story is what makes it a success. good luck, and good story so far. post more soon.
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I like the way you are taking the time to establish the characters so well, and the changes in their relationships.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That opening chapter set the mood pefectly! You managed to compact years into a few paragraphs and not miss any of the major points, excellently done. I even enjoyed the shifts in character brought by time and age, aspecially Severus applauding that wodnerful threat she gave Peeves.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i read this over at the hermione big bang and i loved it... sooo i am going to follow it here... i love a good ss/hg i like hermione in this she is very independent and sev while very diff than jk's sev i still love him of course i am a off character severus lover anyways