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for With The First Ray Of Light

by lilmisblack

schedule March 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hi loving this story, although I'd love for Kingsley to be alive and captured and they get together properly, marry and have a happy life lol, I hope so anyway. Also what is her job exactly? and I can't wait for Harry to realise whata selfish prick he is as Hermione takes the fall for him again even though she supposed to like killing for fun and be a monster.

Also when will you be updating next?

person Blue
schedule July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just read all of the chapters that you wrote and I love this story and I can't wait to find out what happens next. please update when you can.
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
so i think hes alive or this wouldnt be a story about hermione and kingsley. what i want to know is what will happen to caleb if hes found alive. i mean caleb is a good guy i can tell. but i cant help but wonder what will become of this story. i hope you update soon!
person LKinko
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is incredible! I can't wait to find out how the story develops. I'd been checking periodically for updates. I hope it'll be soon.
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sadly you have officially made me become hooked to your story. Its amazing! I've been looking for Kingsley stories everywhere but they're impossible to find any other than one shots!

You have been bookmarked! I'll keep following!

Koolgirl18
person iampast1
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok... so I read this story somewhere else and did not comment (issues with my wireless) but I completely love this story. Original, compelling, and well written. Thank you for sharing this with us:)
person Sampdoria
schedule October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update, I have been looking forward for it. Still a lot of questions in my mind, but that is as it should be at this stage of the story I guess:-))
I am looking forward to read more.