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Both of them are in dire need of a shrink, I

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!

Or as Ron would say, EEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was simply amazing!!!

I was all choked up as I read this and I just felt so much for both of them and it just blew me away and well, eeeeeee!!!!!!!

Please tell me you won't leave it a one shot, please, please, please!!!!!

Did I mention, EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I usually avoid whore!fics and drug!fics (I can stomach holiday!fics if well-written, but these two are *huge* squicks of mine). I must be the only woman in existence who *doesn

Damn it my original thoughts got lost when I hit enter before finishing the password. So at this point I lost my thoughts. But this much I do remember. I do like angsty Ron and really enjoy a good rent!boy story. Poor Ron very lost. You really know how to make the atmoshpere relate to the story. I could feel the gritty underworld of the whorehouse as I read. I liked the legal aspects that were brought up especially the calling card. I sure hopw this one shot doesn't stay so. Not just because I adore your writing and this pairing, but Ron needs to be rescued and Severus needs some happiness and well worth respect. Well both of them do. Again you made a story fit your universe yet keep them canon. Oh I'd like to learn more about that place and what Ron has gone through. It would be interesting to know who these experienced "select" men were.

That was the longest foreplay I think I have ever read - The way the danced around each other was so interesting. And then to have Ron know exactly what Snape wanted without Snape himself knowing was captivating.

It's such a shame this is a one shot - I would like to see Snape's return (and Ron's salvation) - the sign of an excellent story.

Cudos!

you should know that anything you do with snape & ron should never be a one-shot! i demand more!!!