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Cheesecake galore - just get them a vat (what could you do with that scene?).

I lament over Ron's heart felt hopelessness. He just doesn't seem to see anything beyond his own bleakness.
I like Severus wanting to do the right thing and having it conflict with the uncaring man he used to be.

It's coming right along and I can't wait to read more.

Oh and Peter Petigrew and seeing Ron's bits - had me rolling.

i gotta say i like the contrast of severus inside and outside the brothel, it makes an interesting twist in the plot line. but i can understand why he's different in either situation. i really enjoyed it, and to throw in draco in there, awesome! loved it!!

i don't really care how you end it but i don't want it ending like Invitation did. while i liked that story VERY MUCH i'm still saddened by how that one ended. ;_;

update soon!!

OMG!!!! I can't believe I missed chapter 2!!!! well that is like the complete suckage!!!! :(

But on the other hand...I got to read two fabulous chapters one right after the other but still...

God I don't know who is more stubborn, Ron or Severus, I guess both.

I knew Ron hadn't lost all capability to feel something, he still cares about people and Severus, well Severus cares too.

Oh god bless America, I want cheesecake!!!!

As always wonderful job, amazing sex, and even more wonderful characters full of humor, quirks,non perfections and genuine emotions. Le sigh!!!

So good. I'm so glad you are working on another Ron/Snape piece. I swear you have me addicted.

the story is so beautiful.

eagerly awaiting the next chapter so that i see how the whole covering each other in cheesecake thing works out for sev & ron

That was different but I liked it. You sure got me wondering who that last client was. I feel so sad for Ron and it hurts so much to see him so set on self destruction. Sides with Severus. Liked how you changed the patronus and again you got me wondering about what memory Ron was worrying to use. It was nice to see regular life outside of the whorehouse, except Ron's seemed dreary indeed. Again I'm a big Ron/Draco fan but understands when people hate him. Can't wait for more. And what the heck ending there with the Cheesecake sex?!

Interesting chapter. I liked yet was a bit scared finding more about the brothel. Do not like the head lady. *hiss* A different set of emotions like you said, light dark back to light and dark again. I love Ron helping everyone and I have a feeling he's helping not just because of how he feels about suffering but because he's a good guy deep down. Any way, I enjoyed that and the look into a whole different side of Ron and getting more from Severus.

Beautiful - their pain and anxieties are coming out all over each other and they have no choice but to deal with it. They're both wrought with internal conflict while they go about helping others and each other while depriving themselves of comfort.

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Wonderful!! I can't wait for the next chapter.

YAY!! you continued!! is very happy!! I have to say i want a happy ending, his family doesn't have to find out he's alive or anything like that, i just want a happy ending. but i'm not sure that could be done with how broken ron is, hmmmm...

you should know that no one-shot will never be a one shot. we just like your work to much to settle for less. we're just greedy bastards and we want more!!!

so only about 5 chapters, i can live with that especially since your chapters are always so long and full of awesomness. XDD