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June 12, 2021 at 12:00 AM
Starting out quite prmising.....
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. Longer chapters perhaps. Keep up the great work, I can't wait!
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October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great! More, more!
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha! i can't wait to see where this goes!!
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this is going to be a great story. Interesting theme. Please update soon!
Mare
Mare
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sounds v.interesting
I'm excited for the next (hopefully alot longer)chapter =)!
update sooon.
I'm excited for the next (hopefully alot longer)chapter =)!
update sooon.
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic opening chapter! I'll be watching for updates.
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A good start. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey this sounds great. I can't wait to read the next chapter. It's an interesting start having Sev standing in the room looking in on them as they get his memories from him. I don't know if it has been done before, but it's the first time I've read about it. So congrats on that. Also, I know I'm not a beta (I'm not completely sure what a beta is/does) but if the beta is just supposed to catch little mistakes I would be willing to be a beta for you. I think I only really caught a couple.