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for Playing With Fire

by starstruck86

person JanisJ
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Of course I loved this one as well, read it when it first came out....

Just wanted to thank you for your review and also send a quote from an email my friend sent me after I sent her the link to the "man drawer" in regards to the state of her car's trunk....

'Cute story you sent me...I went through her page and LOVED the bill/charlie one.'

I send her all sorts of the best stories to check out (tho' isn't as much of a potterotica addict as I am), and though she never reviews (even my own, meh) she's never taken my advice on checking out an author if she likes a story to see if there are other fics she'd like. She did it all on her own this time! You should feel so honored!! I'm so proud to turn her on to my favorite author! :)

I've been trying, but Snape + other male not Harry (i.e. Weasleys) take some coming to terms with in the abstract (I know, I used to be there myself), but I'm hoping that now she's taken that step into exploring your writing, that she will finally, FINALLY listen to my urgings for the Snape/Charlies and, most importantly, "Seraphim", my all time favorite Snape that isn't a Snarry. (the 'rivalry' story is a close second). You do such magic with the psychology of the characters that it all works so well.


AND thanks so fucking much for the link to your LJ-- it's like finding a treasure trove! That will keep me very happy for quite some time :) You rock! Happy writing!
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so unbelievably realistic, despite the pairing. Bill and Charlie knew that what they share will not last forever, that they will not be able to continue for much longer, and then it happened - the end. That sad, desperate need for each other (especially on Charlie's part) permeated the whole atmosphere.

And Molly's fussing, Charlie's token vanity in his curls, the musings about Ron and Hermione dancing, all was perfect.

Davinci

PS: You have changed my whole view on the Ron/Severus thing. When it was mentioned that Ron kept dancing with Hermione to keep her away from Krum, I immediately thought that, if Severus was there, *she* would be the one dancing with Ron to keep him away from Snape. See what you have done?
person talley
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I rarely read other pairings unless it involves Ron. But because it's you, I took a chance. I'll admit I have a particular liking to Weasleycest and again mainly if not only involving Ron. I liked how they had the guilt and the guilt that they didn't have guilt. lol Enjoyed how they saw the other family; their musings on Ron in particular. Great sex. And nice slide into the DH canon story. Enjoyed it.
person Sheree
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How do you get in their heads like that and make it all so realistic as if it had actually happened within the book and these are the missing pages left out by some idiot editor?

Quite a duo our older siblings turned out to be - Well done (as always)
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well-played!
person evanone
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.
person hairsprayX12
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay once again let me start off by saying that incest is not my thing but...

This was incredibly well written and so full of your awesome humor and wonderful way with describing emotions that I can honestly say...damn that was a good fic. Great job.

lol...I kept expecting Severus to show up and claim Ron from that silly bint Hermoine :P