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for Squires of Slytherin

by DuisterNacht

person karasu
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmm delicious, do write more asap please!!!!
person Taj
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a nice change from the usual Harry in Slytherin fics. It has a lot of potential. I look forward to reading more. Update soon.
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I really enjoyed the way you played Harry. :) And the kiss sounded really scrumptious. I could picture everything. Update soon! :)
person Narcoleptic
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person PhantomPhan
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do you send emails out when you update? If so, please add me to that list. My email is: ravenclawspride9@aim.com
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your timing is interesting, considering the media is all over a certain 76 year-old director accused of raping a thirteen year old when he was in his forties. I know it listed Minor in your warnings, but you might want to post a bigger CHAN identification at the start of your story just for further clarification. An 11 year old being used sexually by his teacher and the rest of his house mates (oh, and I'm sure he'll absolutely looooooove sex, right?) isn't exactly to most people's tastes. Just be a bit more conscientious of your audience.

schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very, very interesting! A rather fresh and intriguing concept. Please do continue. I can't wait for the next chap and the ensuing smut. =P
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Off to a hot start! Please update soon!
person Andrea
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing first chapter! Can't wait to the see the rest of the plot!
person MrGalion
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It has potential.