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January 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this quite a lot, in so many ways. This story is sexy, well written, sexy, very funny, smart; and did I mention sexy? Quite an enjoyable read, and a wonderful shiny surprise to stumble across in the depths of the dreck that is more common to find on AFF. Keep up the good work!
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October 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was brilliantly written! I adored it and most especially how true-to-character the characters were =) thank you oh so much for writing this!
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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, amazing story! Could you please send me an email at raineynight713@gmail.com when you update again? Thanks!
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this.
You have written the best sex scene I have read in a long time.
You have written the best sex scene I have read in a long time.
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September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
pouts... this sooooo could have gone on and i would have greatly enjoyed it i'm sure. thanks for sharing.
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my I just love this story I was nearly in tears from laughing sometimes and there's so much of this fluffy feeling in between it's just great! Keep going!
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, especially rather forceful Harry. I liked it very much.
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy and wonderfully smutty. I read the other one you recently posted as well, Wounds, and loved that too.
I very much like your style and hope to see more!
I very much like your style and hope to see more!
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have an excellent story. Well written, interesting, quite emotive - my only criticism is that it feels very repetitive after reading your other work (which I enjoyed greatly), both stories follow the exact same formulae, the same events and even have virtually the same dialogue at times (for this I think of chapter four, and how in both stories Severus asks if he's experienced, and he replies 'two partners' and etc. etc.). I think you are an excellent writer, I look forward to more, but I also hope to see something new from you in future too :)
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very charming story -- thanks for sharing it here!