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March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's so good to read from you again!
It was almost like you were never gone; the characters stayed in character and the progression of Raven's 'relationship' with Voldemort was great!
The only small slip up I saw was when Raven said he needed to get laid and said he'd only done it a few times. Previously you've had him talk about being a virgin and being okay with that. That part confused me.
Keep up the great work!!
It was almost like you were never gone; the characters stayed in character and the progression of Raven's 'relationship' with Voldemort was great!
The only small slip up I saw was when Raven said he needed to get laid and said he'd only done it a few times. Previously you've had him talk about being a virgin and being okay with that. That part confused me.
Keep up the great work!!
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So does Harry only rember part of the past or is Voldermolt truly lieing? and who killed Ron and Hermione?
Great job, please keep writing!
Please forgive my spelling.
Great job, please keep writing!
Please forgive my spelling.
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
of course its a bit forced... it's Voldie, but no he's still in character. At any rate ty for the up date.
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been checking on this fiction every once in a while..
Still so good! I think it is even getting better. <3
Please keep up the great work.
Still so good! I think it is even getting better. <3
Please keep up the great work.
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love Evan!
This is wonderful.
This is wonderful.
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. Thought it died when I first found it. So happy it didn't. The sarcasm, the way "Raven" puts everyone off, especially Voldermort but takes care of the children is tantelizing and so awesomely funny. Rarely read a fic where Voldermort tangles himself up to be sneered at so nicely and Harry does it so carelessly. I'm chuckling just thinking of it. Please keep writing. I know realize life can really get in the way, but your readers appreciate it ^_^
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October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please write more!!
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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very much enjoying this story so far. :) Can't wait for an update. Do you post it anywhere other than adultfanfiction? I don't use this site very often, so I'm not as familiar with it.
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update. I love your story.