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for Breaking of the Curse ...

by pittwitch

schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Both Bill and Lucius seem to have pushed Severus into an unknown area, having to discipline two pets instead of one... Must read on to find out which object he chooses next!
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Snape is hard-core all the way--how could he not be? *evil grin* The Pet and Boy are in for a full evening! In more ways than one... The Master has lots of toys!
schedule November 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
And the race begins! The evening is just beginning, and I love how Bill is such a quick learner, Lucius assured as ever, and Snape in total charge, a la Snape-style!
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I know I wrote you that Snupin is/was my favourite slash pairing, but, um, they are going to have to share it with Lucius & Bill (actually, I have this 'thing' about Bill & Charlie Weasley--lol!). Lucius is puuuurfect, and can't wait to experience with Bill what the delicious predator has in store for him--hehe! Think I'll go get a glass of wine to sip on before/while I continue. Just delicious set up!
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Snape as the Master-this is taking my breathe away! Love your detailed description and dialogue, and action, and everything--can just feel the energy between them and Severus in control with, now, two pets to play with *taking deep breathes* Looking forward to more!
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying the slow burn and build up very, very much! Love the switching over between Severus and Lucius, and Lucius' experienced know-how--yes, Bill is in for quite the experience with two very skilled Masters!
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, that whetted the appetite! And has put everyone on alert! *grinning* Severus' is beginning to respond, slowly but surely... Yum!xxx
schedule November 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, what has Snape in store for them? He has become displeased? Yes, I suppose he doesn't take someone lying or the suspicion of them lying to him very well... Can't wait to see what he does--reading on!
person James
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is there any chance that you could do a cheating story? With Ginny or Hermione cheating on Harry with any guy and Tonks helping them along?

seefamily1992@yahoo.com
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Please write more!