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October 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
T.T why'd you stop this?
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November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Do I even have to say this. Update!
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I usually don't review on-going stories...but I wanted to ask you if you needed a beta/proofreader. I'm very good at English, and would love to help...so if you want me to beta, or have any questions, just give me an email (it should be on my profile)
Good Luck with the story,
Hunter
Good Luck with the story,
Hunter
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think this was a cool story with and interesting way of misleading snape. thanks for writing it I hope you update it agian soon
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October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this. Had a few twists already. Please keep it up. Can't wait til the next chapters. Please update soon.
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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
vary good i cant wait to read the next chapter :)
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good little story. It can be a little difficult to follow whose P.O.V is being represented but I imagine with the aid of a beta reader this will soon be cleared up. I intend to keep reading as it has promise.
;)
;)
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keeping Harry's feelings for Snape a secret for that long was a nice touch, but i think you rushed Snape's feelings a bit.
Great story so far, I loved that part with Harry and Draco. Poor Harry.
Keep going, I really like it.
Great story so far, I loved that part with Harry and Draco. Poor Harry.
Keep going, I really like it.
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story will snape find out soon
Can't wait for more
Can't wait for more
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Poor Snape a bit jealous and thinks Harry doesn't like him. Harry thinking Snape hates him. look forward to how things unfold for them.