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for Your Cruelty is a Mask

by DamienRaquel

schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 2!!!!
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked the plot of this story but it kinda jumped about at the start and the grammar didn't flow as well as it could have. Also, Draco's eyes are grey, not blue and purple, and Draco is older than Harry by about 6 weeks, so Harry isn't the "older boy". Sorry, I just hate to see little details bringing down a decent story.
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is good but...is it a one-shot or WIP, coz really it could b either

aya