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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A memory while having sex or the true sex revealed? Continue!!!
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September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dragonangelx003, I appreciate the review. I definitely know Harry's eye color. However, Draco's evaded me when I was writing. Blue is the actors eye color. But you are right they are written as grey. I wanted this piece to be poetic, confusing, and thought evoking.
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting approach and almost poetic. My only qualm is that if you're talking about Harry he has green eyes and Draco has gray, contrary to the movie. Keep up the good work.