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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what language are you using? It vaguely resembles english...
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Spell-check desperately wants to be your friend.
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
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September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice premise but you seriously need a beta. There's a typo in every line.
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September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and why would the broken ribs be a continuing problem? Poppy can fix bones in a second.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please Please get someone to check the spelling. Mussell is something you eat not a part of the body. Poppy wants him to stay not wont him to stay.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus's self-worth was always linked to his abilities and skills. And the fact that he doesn't know if he will ever be able to work, or even brew potions for recreational purposes, is going to be hard. Not only on himself, but also on Albus.
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September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It could be a good story but you really need to check the spelling.
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Albus - and here I speak, as most of us, by personal experience - must have passed the worse hours of his life, not knowing if Severus was going to make it at all or not.
And it's really good that this chapter is longer.
And it's really good that this chapter is longer.
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It seems like an interesting premise; my only complaint? That it's so short.