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for To Devour The Soul

by escapethefate

schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like Dumbledore when he is in Grandfather mode.....not manipulate and stealing.
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jake must already know harry is his mate.
With all his money, Harry can get himself a car and maybe help fix up Billy's home.
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh...possessive Jacob!
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like that the Tyler, Mike, etc. group like Harry and are ok with him being gay.
Maybe they(some of them) could be mates for some of the mateless shifters/
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Emily...cooking like that. harry should see about having a house elf. Then he can have it help her when she cooks for the pack.
Interesting meeting nwith Edward!
schedule August 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is really good. it's also the first jb/hp I've seen, so I'm really excited to see more of it!
schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH tell me there is more please!
person Diapered Hanku
schedule August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story, I hope you continue it.
person Stebba
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohh please please update soon this is such a funny and fun story to read and I love how things are going, I really like what you had Harry do with the tattoo and accessory though I don't know about the eyes yet I always liked them emerald green and the likes so I'm getting used to that.
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This storry is so funny. I undersaind Jacob's worry. Well Update if you will. thamk you.