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for Beauty Is Not Gold

by tambrathegreat

schedule July 19, 2023 at 12:00 AM

You're a wonderful writer. I love this pairing. 

schedule July 19, 2023 at 12:00 AM

You're a wonderful writer. I love this pairing. 

person Sheree
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful piece.

I have this odd place in my heart for this pairing and your story superb.
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you wrote the second chapter with Ron's point of view. I like it when authors do that, the different angle thing.

I liked Ron's word of the day. See, it's the little details that make a story more authentic.

I like how damaged Snape is in this and how just a little kindness affects him (Ron cleaning his house).

In some ways, Snape always seemed more 'human' to me than a lot of the other characters.
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is lovely and moving. Thank you for sharing!
Hugs-
Daisy
person Jilliane
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM


Here's what I like best about this story, the second chapter in particular--you've captured Ron so exquisitely well. When reading this through, I could actually picture him (well the "him" in my mind's eye)saying these words. I think this is just exactly how Ron would be.

Bravo! Really great work.
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I do that mad little dance whenever I find a new Snape/Ron.

I really did like this, Severus' conflicted feelings and Ron's brazen yet still timid nature were perfect as they were written.

I also think it worked well for the less is more on the smut, the way it passes over but we're all in no doubt of what they've done.

Thank you for sharing!
person abbicee
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this. I've developed a definite fondness for Ron/Snape and I'm glad to see a bit more of this pairing.
person talley
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that. A nice mix of angst and hope. I liked how they could connect as people who have always followed and been for the most part in the shadows and yet endeavoured great personal pain. I agree with another reviewer but must add; I get giddy when ANY story appears featuring Ron here. More so if he's paired with Snape or Draco. So it's nice when it's a good story too.