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person Sheree
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aaawwww!!! So happy they found each other - a comfort zone where they know both know it even if they haven't declared it ---YET.

Bravo! Bravo!
person kai
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes, things are too well at the moment. something angsty has to happen!! but i wonder what? someone finds snape or the prophet finds out that ron's gay or someone else does? what will happen!! don't make us wait to long for the next update!! ^_^
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WTF, HOW THE BALLS DO YOU HAVE ONLY SIX CHAPTERS, BUT WITH 600 HITS AND 27 REVIEWS? HOW DO YOU DO IT?! I'M CONFUSED. HALP ME.
person kai
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whoa, ron some serious issues there. 3 weeks paid time off with severus, awesome, i can't wait to see what they'd do. ^_^
person Sheree
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Delightful as ever - everything seems to be getting "tied" together now - LOL
person abbicee
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron, it just all came together and hit him didn't it? Well at least Severus is there to help him get through it, but I can't blame his family for being worried. After all, they don't know about Severus. If only George had a Severus in his life, Molly might finally be able to relax. I wonder if part of Ron's problem is that he hasn't had complete closure with Hermione. Perhaps he needs to sit and talk to her and ask her just what happened and what was lacking so he can realize it wasn't all his fault, that she has to bear some of the blame too. Well, all things considered maybe he should do that latter rather than sooner. Anyway can't wait for the next chapter to see how he and Severus hold up under long term contact.
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ron finally snaps. I knew he was taking so many things more or less in stride, until everything just piles and piles and one has to let it all out
person morganabythesea
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...he hasn't run away completely...yet?

Loved it! The ups the downs, the better understanding of each other, the acceptance, the sex. I hope Severus helps Ron realize that he is wanted, not a failure, etc. The boy needs a boost of confidence, so does Severus for that matter. Come to think of it, don't we all? :-)

Looking forward to the next installment, I'm already feeling withdrawl symptoms. :-)
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron. I think we've all been there at some point. I'm so glad that Severus accepted him and the girls (Rats rule!) This chapter was very powerfully written and I really enjoyed the naughty bits. You have such a talent for writing them.
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You capture Ron so well! I love how he is so emotionally fragile but doing his best to hide it. I can't wait for the rest of his 'vacation'