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See! I told you (well, myself) that Severus did have a backstory with Remus. Not necessarily romantic, but still, Teddy's appearance affected him a lot more than the rest (except Ron).

And Hermione's dirty little secrets. Ah yes. Is there some phrase in English to say: predicar con el ejemplo (to preach by settling an example)? It is commonly used to say that she is always telling people how to act, what to say, what to think, and how to do things, but, really, she does the same thing she is criticising others for.

Also, she needs help. And I am not referring only to her fear of commitment and her apparent inability to settle, but also to the fact that she is ruthless to get what she wants, and still paranoid enough about the events of the war (the wards around her house). Her boss (and future husband, if she goes through the wedding at the end) is going to have to deal with it, and it won't be easy.

And Ron's awe at Severus's defence of him. I had wanted to hug him there.

And then you killed me with the smut. Dead. Although I died happy.

Davinci

PS:Tomorrow's the last chapter? *wails*

Thank you for giving Hermione the proverbial slap in the face - although I wouldn't have blame Ron or Severus is they had actually bodily removed her from their home. Egads - what a witch!

Love Severus' defense - A1!

And the smut - well when I'm able to solidify my body again - I'll let you know.

**WAILS TOO - so soon the end

So lovely. I love the way you treated and expressed survivor's guilt. Now can we get George a little loving for being such a good big brother.

Oh, I'm still waiting for Hermione's come-uppance :)

i feel like this chapter was written solely for me and i love you for it. ^_^
also that random dude in the bathroom was awesome!! and i love george in here, i feel for him so much and it just hurts that he knows that he'll never find anyone but that he's able to help ron pull his head out of his arse and get his man. great job there.

also that love confession from both of them, oh god that was sheer awesomeness, i loved it too.

and the make up sex! *whew* that was hot! so smexy!!

update soon!!!

OMG I was in tears - Severus was so vicious (and perfect!)

And the line about the lack of fireworks and rose petals was great - they were just sitting on the kitchen floor!

What a shame this has to end ;)

YES!!! :-) Thank Merlin for George! I believe that boy deserves a chance at a happy ending. Wonderful as always. Your argument between Ron and Severus seemed so real a plausible for their characters that you even gave me a stomach ache. I'm so glad they worked it out, I feel so much better now. LOL Really, this story has been great, thanks again for sharing with us.

When you promise the infamous Snape temper, you *deliver* the famous Snape temper. Add to that Ron

Good. They needed to get that out of the way. Severus and Ron were both skirting the issue of their feelings, and it's about time they both admitted they love each other. Oh, and yeah, that was really hot-making at the end. Lovely.

Whew! What a ride that was, more stomach churning than that Space Mountain thing at Disneyland. But it ended well with words of love and hot sex. Yay for George. He deserves a happy ending too. I sure hope Ron's nurse or whatever realizes that Ron is well and truely taken. Moulin Rouge? Of course, I love that movie, but when I tired to think of musical starcrossed lovers all I could come up with was West Side Story. Must be a sign of my age.

yes! snape temper!!! it was bound to come out sooner or later. ^_^
a lovely chapter as usual, can't wait for the next installment. ^_^