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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very bittersweet ending -- sweet for the pair, bitter for the readers. Thanks so much for sharing.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
**Snoopy Dance of Complete and Utter Happiness**
They said the words!!!! Oh yeah, oh yeah!!!!
What!!! Only two more chapters?!? But, but, but :( Okay, but can Herms get her butt kicked (just saying, left at the altar would be nice *blinks innocently*)
Wondering if you have any ideas about the next Ron and Severus story? Umm, interesting if Ron was a single parent and Severus was his child's teacher...or what ever genius idea you come up with next
They said the words!!!! Oh yeah, oh yeah!!!!
What!!! Only two more chapters?!? But, but, but :( Okay, but can Herms get her butt kicked (just saying, left at the altar would be nice *blinks innocently*)
Wondering if you have any ideas about the next Ron and Severus story? Umm, interesting if Ron was a single parent and Severus was his child's teacher...or what ever genius idea you come up with next
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, It takes me awhile to read and I've only had time late in the evenings and the two chapters prior I had actually fallen asleep reading desperately trying to stay awake to finish. I have loved the evolution of Ron and Snape's relationship. Adored the brother bonding. Laughed and sighed at Severus with his stubborness. Awwwwed at George and his life and taking care of Ron. My stomach clinched along with Ron's heart at Severus' words. I can't believe how quickly and deeply I can get entangled in the universe you write. I don't want this to be the end. Awaits more but wonders about the way these two will decided to live as now a "bonded" couple?
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Masterful Snape, oh yeah! Love him. Love them!
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hermione got what she deserved. I feel for her future husband. Happy End is gettig closer...YEAH
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the latest chapter. I was so happy to see Hermione get what was coming to her -- though I had expected her fellow to leave her at the alter.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Double review since I was dragged about a Build-A-Bear by the b/f's daugther and missed the previous chapter.
I liked the toilet papering of Ron. Lends authenticity to the typical older brothers torturing the youngest brother thing.
Lucky for Sev that Ron's a great guy. Nasty fight that was. I liked the guy in the bathroom stall eavesdropping and offering to take Ron of Severus' hands.
LOVE the idea of Severus and Ron huddling with each other watching scary horror flicks.
And Hermione...sheesh. You know, I like that you've written her as rather unlikeable. Usually she's written as a Sue, all perfect and all knowing. It's refreshing to see her written as kind of a cow.
And as for the sexy-times scenes...Jaysis! You've got a talent for them!
I liked the toilet papering of Ron. Lends authenticity to the typical older brothers torturing the youngest brother thing.
Lucky for Sev that Ron's a great guy. Nasty fight that was. I liked the guy in the bathroom stall eavesdropping and offering to take Ron of Severus' hands.
LOVE the idea of Severus and Ron huddling with each other watching scary horror flicks.
And Hermione...sheesh. You know, I like that you've written her as rather unlikeable. Usually she's written as a Sue, all perfect and all knowing. It's refreshing to see her written as kind of a cow.
And as for the sexy-times scenes...Jaysis! You've got a talent for them!
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I loved the part with Hermione. It always amazes me when people act like that. (My husband' ex did almost the same thing.) It was really satisfying when Ron told her off.
And Snape being jealous of Ron's little kiss with Harry. I could see it and the reaction afterwards. Lovely bit of hotness there.
Great job. I always look forward to reading this story.
And Snape being jealous of Ron's little kiss with Harry. I could see it and the reaction afterwards. Lovely bit of hotness there.
Great job. I always look forward to reading this story.
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i can't believe hermione! she's such a bad girl!! all those spells and asking for ron back!! OMG!!!
also that sex scene!! OMG! was that awesome! that was too hot, i loved it a lot.
ron quitting his job, that doesn't surprise me but what will do now, hmm as they said a lot of possibilities!
also that sex scene!! OMG! was that awesome! that was too hot, i loved it a lot.
ron quitting his job, that doesn't surprise me but what will do now, hmm as they said a lot of possibilities!
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September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story it like im in the room with them and i love story like that.