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person abbicee
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Did Hermione take a cruciatus to the brain or something? Is the alien invasion on and she's really a pod person? What happened to the brightest witch of her age? It must be something about all those dark spells she's been using. You know that's how Voldie started. A dark spell here, a dark spell there and the next thing you know she's buying Visine by the caseload. Thank goodness Ron has Severus to ground him and to make him realize how lousy Hermione was for him. And how much hotter the sex with Severus is. Just one more chapter? How did we get to the end so quickly?
person evanone
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You just made my day. *grin* I loved it.
person Sheree
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!!

I started out crying from laughing at "nocturnal emissions" and ended up crying over the rings.

That was beautiful - can't wait to see what you come up with next.

And Thanks again for the Christmas tree ;)
person kai
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!! george has someone!! XDD
also the cunning bastard!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA....LOVE!!!

i really love your snape/ron fics. write more please!!!
person natwest
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I am very much a fangirl of Snape/Ron now. Never saw the pairing but now a fan. My question is Xmas dinner, when Molly saw the rings and how the rest of them react to them.

Plus Snape 50 birthday what did they do.
person abbicee
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oohh. . . (happy contented sigh). This is one I'm definitely pulling out during the holidays for a nice "get me in the mood" read. I will now admit that I am greedy to a fault and want more. I want to see Severus at the Weasley's. I want to see him get a new wand. I wonder if Ollivander will be surprised to see him come in. I want Minerva to see him, scream and then faint dead away. I want to see George bring his new girlfriend home, tatoos and all. Didn't the fortune telling cracker promise Molly she'd be buying a new hat for a wedding? I'm sure it didn't mean Hermione's. I want, well, more. ;-) And, if I haven't said it before, I am deeply grateful for every word you have typed.
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I'm going to miss this story. I loved it so much. I like how you made them come full circle,without the attempted murder of the Christmas tree. I would love to see them in ten years. Thanks for sharing this lovely story with us.

person hairsprayX12
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness!!! I loved this story!! It was so freaking awesome and funny and sweet and smexy and just so Ron and Severus. Le sigh at the happy ending!!! It was wonderful (and left me with a desire to see the party Ron would throw for Severus on his 50th)

What do you mean darker then Invitation? Eeekers!!!! But I'll read it and be blown away by your talent!

*scampers to buy super industrial strength Kleenex and some really strong whiskey to prepare*

Once again awesome job and thanks for sharing with us :)
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awww! What a wonderful story. Thank you for writing it.
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And the end is here - I truly am sorry to see it end, you know. Severus has grown quite a bit this year as a human being, and has become more tolerant of others - there is no way he would have decorated his house like that for just anyone. Or think about maybe returning to the wizarding world. He is, also, more or less healed, which is something I am sure Ron is elated about. And his interaction with the healers also shows that he is more relaxed and content.

I'm happy for George, too. He has had such a hard time, and seems to want to return to his life, to try and be happy. His mischievous nature has come back - starting by the rings.

Severus defiling the poor fairy - and George thinking on benefitting form it for his shop! Too good.

All in all, another of my favourite fics.

Davinci

PS: I always say the same. But. Please, more?

PS2: You *have* started a Severus/Ron fanclub, you know. It's such an underappreciated pairing...