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person talley
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked that. I liked the atmosphere in this. I could feel the cold at the start and the warmth in the pub. I'm curious by Snape and the evil Hermione. The sex scenes were very good. Poor Ron, I could feel the tightness around his heart when he allowed himself to think. I like the touches like the tree, the falling and the clock and the breakfast and and and everything. I vote for more and Severus answering the letter but doing so by mail. I'm intrigued by how you may take this plot.
person hairsprayX12
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So awesome that Severus responded to Ron :) And I loved that they both thought about one another throughout the day. Poor George, so lost without his twin.
I love how believable you make Severus and Ron as a couple, just the right amount of sweetness and raunchiness too. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person LoveLee
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would definetly love to see this story continue and how their relationship will evolve.
person kai
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes! severus should respond to the note!!!
person Sheree
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
How do you do that? They just keep getting better and better and you left SO many unresolved story lines fluttering about like tinsel on a Christams tree. You took this so far beyond sex under a Christmas Tree.....

You know my vote.....
person morganabythesea
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course! There will also be our happy ending, right? :-)
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I tend to avoid holiday!fics like the plague, much as I avoid holiday!films (I think, in fact, my aversion for them stymies from the movies my little sister forced me to watch), but then, there are authors that you just *know* will write a fic that you will enjoy, and you read it, and you love it even more than you could have imagined, and that redeem the whole genre for you because they reach beyond any expectative.

As always, allow me to gush over the characterizations. Ron
person hairsprayX12
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Happy Dance!!!!!!!!!!!! Of course Severus should respond to Ron!!!!! Please!!!!!
person Onyxsonal
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!!!!!! More !!! I love the idea of Ron and Severus having an actual relationship and put hermione in her place while also making Harry feel better.
person evanone
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Of course he should. Otherwise we wont see their happy ending. I so like those.