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for He Doesn't Love Me

by iampast1

schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I loved this drabble....
person nessie
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was really good. I was almost ready to cry when you added Narcissa'a line. Would you do one on his prospective?
person Tenar10r
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice little one-shot.
person evanone
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The end was so suprising and to the point. Good oneshot.
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohhh awwwwh that is so sweet.. i hope there might be more to this story. You could really make this a awesome short story or something. :P Although it is a cute lil one shot right now.

keep up the good work :]
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would really really really like it if you expanded on the story, it seems like a really good plot and I would love to know all the little details!
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. I wish it was longer than a one-shot because I would love to see their relationship develop.
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't change a thing; it's just perfect the way it is.
person jess
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww........ i've left boxes of three-ply tissues at the entrance to this story....smiles.....it was lovely. Beautifully done. soft and dreamy and just the thing i needed to read tonight.

thank you.

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