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October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay for someone being nice to Harry, and yay for what will happen when Moody turns up :)
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant story!!! Looking forward for an update. I liked this chapter very much.
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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it, very hot. Thanks for updating.
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September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I just want to say how much I love your story! I am usually not into these types of scenarios, but this story is so erotically charged, that I find myself constantly checking for updates! So, more please, and the sooner the better:)! I am really liking the unusual pairings in this fic, and am hoping that the tale gets even more descriptive and explicit as it goes on;). Thanks so much for your work!
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September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is well written in the conventions of literature sense, your labeling of it however is misleading. This story is more than "slightly" non-consensual. As written by definition of the word this IS rape. The amount of pleasure or pain received is inconsequential, the important element is whether or not permission has been given. In fact in both situations in chapter one and two Harry acts to stop his attackers. He's not glad it happened afterward nor does he want it repeated.
Warnings are an important part for every author to consider if they care at all about those who may read their work, because many readers are disturbed by certain situations while others may be drawn to them. For instance I'm ok with some minor NC where the "victim" comes to encourage and perpetuate the situation, but I find situations where someone is actually being sexually abused sickening. I'll read a story where the victim escapes the situation before I'm too disturbed to continue, but yours shows a likelihood of continuing in the abuse. I hope you do continue your story for those who enjoy it, but please change the label for those like me who may start reading it in good faith, but find it more than they bargained for.
Best Wishes,
Wump
Warnings are an important part for every author to consider if they care at all about those who may read their work, because many readers are disturbed by certain situations while others may be drawn to them. For instance I'm ok with some minor NC where the "victim" comes to encourage and perpetuate the situation, but I find situations where someone is actually being sexually abused sickening. I'll read a story where the victim escapes the situation before I'm too disturbed to continue, but yours shows a likelihood of continuing in the abuse. I hope you do continue your story for those who enjoy it, but please change the label for those like me who may start reading it in good faith, but find it more than they bargained for.
Best Wishes,
Wump
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
naww poor Harry. I really want someone to come ans heal up poor little Harry... ... and then screw him all over again:)
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was deliciously evil!! I cant wait to see what happens to poor harry next!! OOOOOOHHHHHH How about a potion that burns as it heals!!! hehe any who cant wait to read more!!
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
8D Yummy, yummy, yummy~!! More please~ nom, nom, nom~! XD
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.O Ohhhh This looks like fun! I cant wait for the next chapter, I hope it is up as quickly as the last. Even if its not, I cant wait to read it!!
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THat is so sick and wrong and I love it and would like more:) Can we please have some Snape?