schedule
September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fun, simple, an enjoyable little puffy piece. Its also a bit difficult to read. When a new person speaks (or acts within a conversation,) you need to start a new paragraph. Without this typography, it becomes hard to distinguish who is speaking, despite speech tags as they may occur after the sentence. Take that as constructive criticism as you move forward and I look forward to seeing more stuff from you.