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Hey there, you amazing writer,

I just want to start off the whole thing with a huge THANK YOU! Thank you for writing and sharing this lovely little masterpiece (and the prelude and the sequel too!). I love it dearly, and this is the reason I'd like to ask for your permission to translate it into Hungarian and shar with the fans at home too on Hungary's biggest fanfic site, Merengő: https://fanfic.hu/merengo/index.php and on my DW account: https://laraflame.dreamwidth.org

I will naturally credit you as the sole author and translate back the reviews too for you.

I really hope you're still around and everything is alright! Hug 'n' kisses ^3^

Hope to hear from you,
Lara

ah damn it. i want more. i wannaknow what the article said and i wanna know dumbles plans.
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its been a while sense the last update whats going on?

Okay, I finally finished this story, having promised both you and myself, after having read the prequel (T(NS)BL: Negotiation), that I would read it right away. It was well worth it: the humiliation of Dumbledore is deeply satisfying, not to mention hilarious. My only complaint is that it comes to an abrupt end on a cliffhanger: what is Dumbly's next evil plan? [insert diabolical laughter here] I have many other questions that I won't even try to enumerate here. I like it well enough to offer my services as beta, if you'd like, although I once again assure you that your English is really quite good.

I can only imagine what a painful decision it must have been, not to include slash! I have known people to leave out the "adult" material in the version of a story they posted to ff.com, although obviously this only works if said "adult" parts are not necessary to the main plot. (Perhaps Rita could do a story revealing just how pervy Dumbledore and Grindelwald were. I'm sure this is just my dirty mind talking, but it seemed to me that JKR implied several times in DH that Aberforth was more than just friendly with those goats of his; maybe it ran in the family.)

On a spearate note, Hedwig is clearly meant to look like a snake, presumably to express Harry's support for Voldie and/or Slytherin House.

Keep it up!

OMG I Love this!

Interesting! Loved it!

Love this!

GREAT Chapter, can't wait to see what Dumbles has up his sleeve!

There were a couple of spelling errors here (like Gringewald instead of Grindelwald and Ariadna instead of Ariana). I wonder what Dumbledork's up to? Hope you are able to update soon.

Great CHappy, though I am not going to try to figure it out cause I would probably just embarass myself.