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by starstruck86

schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
When I discovered the other Ron/Severus fic you wrote, I immediately thought that you were going to post first the end of the
person hairsprayX12
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Heck! I love all your stories!! I loved Linger and even though you made me cry the snotty cry I loved Invitation but by far my favorite is the whole Dreams series (it started with Dreams so I always think of it as that plus throw in Jack and El's ability to know things from their dreams and well...)

Your stuff is brilliant and so well written and when you consider that I am usually not a fan of slash...well...did I mention brilliant? You have made Ron and Severus one of my all time favorite couples, they are so funny and sexy and scary (in a good way) and just all around wonderul together! Anyways can't wait for your next story. And thanks for sharing these wonderful writings with us.
person talley
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. I was so smitten with letter writing going back and forth and uhmm getting misdirected. Very funny yet a tender and sexy final segment to this series. Glad Ron is better regarding his ribs and lol I squeed when you refered to that coldness Ron experiences. Thank you for that. What can I say? I'm sorry to see this universe end. I'd love to know more about these triplets and their cousins. I really enjoy the way you write and impact the reader with your characters. I have a feeling in the not too distant future I'll be rereading this series again and again. Too much to comment on once I think on it, like the ipod and Ron cooking and singing with the kids joining in. Glad Serverus grew as a person too. I can only hope that you may come back to this universe to do another look into the future someday. Just because I love it so much. btw Invitation was an excellent story which I did enjoy and to be honest have lingering thoughts on. It just was very very angsty for me. I am in awe of the vampire and old wizarding world lore you evoked. Don't you go apologising for writing YOUR story and the YOU wanted it and more importantly where you saw and knew where that particular story should end. but I am very estatic to know this Ron and Snape have a happy ending. *hugs*
person abbicee
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sigh. Sometimes happy sappy endings are just what's needed. I loved this series. The ups, the downs, and the "happy ever after" ending. I've been reading a very heavy angst story recently and I like to read this series to put a smile back on my face. A new story coming soon? I can't wait for it. :-)
person kai
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was lovely!! and it was the happy ending that i needed after the ending in 'Invitation' ^_^
do more snape/ron stuff!! your such a lovely writer for it. ^_^
person Sheree
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think the title says it all "PERFECT"