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I like the concept. I think you had draco and silvers relationship happen a bit too fast. she just started to trust him too fast and forget about everything he did to her in school. maybe you could have this issue come up later? possibly an argument and some things were said that trigger the memories? just to clear up why she trusts and forgives him now for all those horrible things. Just a suggestion.

oh wow what a full chap a lot happened here... so silver gave harry a wake up call and right when he was trying to do something for himself ginny tells him that she iks pg hmmm why do i not believe that.... so they are getting married how sweet of draco to ask in front of their families... pansy slept with ron yuck on buth cases ugh!!! so how much ya wannna bet the bottle pansy gave ron is polyjuice potion??? and he is going to try to kidnap silver.... well needless to sayi really am looking forward to the next chap

Poor Harry, I hope he has the sense to make damn sure she IS pregnant. Love the little matchmaking going on between Blaise and Cassie and of course, Draco and Silver were, once again, hot together. :)

Poor Harry, he is so noble and this Ginny is simply evil... Fun Fun Fun.. More please!

great job so silver and draco have taken the next step in their relationship and her dad has given his blessing for draco and silver to wed.... great twist there with harry cancelling on ginny to meet luna i like them together and i think that luna will get harrys head out of his ass and make him see that silver has been his true family... i am glad that silver is getting in contact with cassie and luna they will be nice additions plus cassie will be an original charactor for you so you can make her whoever and whatever you want... i cannot wait for you update i am looking forward to see what ginny ron and pansy are up to

Love it, their first time Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!

I think that was a very sexy scene for a first time try, definitely backed up by their love for each other, and it is nice to read when someone actually gets their first time right. LOL Very, very worried about what Ginny, Ron and now Pansy are up to but there is that silver lining now that Harry has rediscovered his friendshiop/feelings for Luna. I have a really good feeling about that. Can't wait to see what's next. :)

Silver 1 Pansy 0 Lovely!!!!!!!!!!

wow what a great chap... i am soo glad that silver has finally decided her feelings for draco and how sweet is he.. following them while they shopped and buying her a kitty... so ron is still crazy hmmm i wonder what he is going to try next and what in the hell is wrong with harry??? way to put the parkinsons in their place that was a great moment and i really like the progress in silver and blaises relationship... i cannot wait for the next chap

I love your Story.
Just one question. In the Line:
"When he strolled back from purchasing the kitten, Silver kissed him lightly on the lips", is she kissing Draco or Drago?
Please continue!
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