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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent so far! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next.
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You were wonderful :P Dont wrry i got it now, im such a blonde sometimes i swear. :]
I can hardly wait for the next chapter, i love how draco is so forward. Oh an that goyles in this!
He was my favorite of the malfoy lackys lol.
Keep up the good wrk darling :] update. :D
I can hardly wait for the next chapter, i love how draco is so forward. Oh an that goyles in this!
He was my favorite of the malfoy lackys lol.
Keep up the good wrk darling :] update. :D
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A very exciting beginning! i am impatient to find out where you will go with this.
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting start!!
I love the idea that neither side is what they seem,
Can't wait to see where you take this!
xoxo
I love the idea that neither side is what they seem,
Can't wait to see where you take this!
xoxo
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG are you kidding me with the question!!! You have to continue! You can't leave a cliff hanger! I need to know what happens next!
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING -- hell yes continue...brilliant
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I actually thought in the beginning that it might be some weird story, but its great! Its a new twist finally instead of all the other stories. i love it. But some of it is slightly confusing.. Hermiones 'mother' is her aunt..and snapes sister and uh uh lol see i just confused myself. Maybe its just me but i would love it if you did like a characters list lol would help me out so i can read this ah-mazing story better :P
plz an thank you...keep up the good work :P:P update update :]
plz an thank you...keep up the good work :P:P update update :]
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooo.
I like this v.much!
plot is sounding very interesting and manipulative AD is done quite nicely!
UPDATE!!!
I like this v.much!
plot is sounding very interesting and manipulative AD is done quite nicely!
UPDATE!!!
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Goodness! This is truly going to be different. I'm fascinated & can't wait to see how it develops. Going back now to re-read & try to pin down the relationships...they're kind of swirling around in my mind right now. Please don't keep us hanging...
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September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of potential. You've set up her relationship with voldemort and the nott's very well, as well as showing dumbledore's nature to use people to his advantage. I would LOVE to see you continue the story as I'm curious to see where it will go but please work on editing. There were some simple errors that were distracting. Overall a food start.