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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No, I don't think so. This most recent chapter was fine with the font size. This site often has upload glitches, I think. I like the inventive explanations you had for all of JKR's important plot events. Very cunning on your part. :D
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey, I reallly love your writting style it is soo good, and your story is so interesting. Hurry up and post the next chapter please
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really good, so far! I just had to reduce the font size on the second chapter so I could read each line all in one go. I remember a similar story, showing Riddle in a good light, but I think either Hermione or Harry was supposedly related to him and he had a sister who ended up a Professor at Hogwarts. I'm looking forward to more of this! :D
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Again, a very engrossing third chapter! Loved the byplay between Goyle and Draco. You've made him smarter than the books, and I'm glad. :D
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I wonder if Albus is going to realize how (er) riddled with defectors the Order is? Sorry about the pun, but I couldn't resist. I can't wait to see the explanation of the familial relationships.
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September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow - evil order and annoying Ron....I would LOVE for Draco to get a hold of him. Can't wait to see how you're going to turn this on its head.....
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it! The contrast between the beginning of this chapter with the tension of the chase, compared to the really hilarious section involving Hermione's underwear and Draco's eligibility as a model for a bodice-ripper romance series... I do enjoy comic relief. On relationships, guess I'm going to have to print both chapters & pull out the highlighter. Also, it is just WILD to have the good guys & bad guys totally reversed, with Dumbledore now apparently bad-guy-in-chief. Where does Harry come into this? Oh, keep it up.
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is great story! so unique and intriguing!
love your line about draco as a cover model mmmmmm haha
please continue!
love your line about draco as a cover model mmmmmm haha
please continue!
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, thank you for the compliment....my muse has been laying low for a bit but this story has re-energized me. I LOVED the fighting sequence. I think you handled the back and forth POVs so wonderfully. Really well done so congrats. I can't wait for more. My fave line "you have alot of muscles." LOL
PS: is Harry dead? What's up with this?
PS: is Harry dead? What's up with this?
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September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like how you've portayed the 'dark side' so far, as people who have family and friends to fight for rather than just as killing machines. Has remus defected from the order? Love the story, keep it up! :)