rate_review Reviews

The story is going well. You might think about getting a beta to smooth out the rough areas, but otherwise the story is going fine. As for the PMS, girl, I feel your pain. One time in one of my own stories I came close to wanting to kill off everyone because my body was a PMSing to the max. I took to bed, took pain reliever, and watched shows that made me laugh. Hope things go better next month and keep up the good work.

Loved the new chapter with all the additional plot strings being woven in. Some distracting grammer/spelling typos, but the plot continues to intrigue me. :D

I am really looking forward to more of this story! I am really enjoying it so far!

Great story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

I never considered an evil Dumbledore until I started reading fanfic. And an evil Ron too? Wow. And so far, it is believeable! (I mean that as fairly high praise, since many fics seem to make large leaps without proper motivation)
Uncle Snape too, haha,that's awesome.
I'm interested to see what that wand cuff thing is all about and if Draco will tell Hermione its properties. I hope so, because she's bound to find out anyway. She is Hermione, after all.
I'd be excited to see more Hermione/Theo sibling development in future chapters (nudge, nudge), but it's understandable that it sort of takes a back seat to the Draco/Hermione development. At any rate, I'm excited to see what your imagination has planned for the future here. Keep up the good work!

OMG!! I love this story!! I'm really excited after reading this...I always love watching a good Dumbledore bashing/evil Dumbledore story. I've never read a D/Hr one, as usually it's H/Hr--so this is super exciting.

That's just terrible about how Dumbledore just killed people and how he duped everyone. I hope they get Harry on board soon. That journal is ingenious!! And I really laughed when Greg told Snape that Hermione liked his muscles. Really giggled at that!! =D

I can't wait for the next chapter!

i really liked this chap.. so draco is courting hermione and can protect her... so why do i have a bad feeling that ron is not going to like this so much.... i like the relationship that hermione and her family are developing.... i cannot believe ron killed crooks that was horrible although i am glad that hermione has a new familiar... i wonder what the men have in store for samuel??? should be interesting that is for sure.... ohh and i loved the dream it was hysterical at the end when he heard what the elf was saying instead of hermione... please update i am definitely looking forward to the next chap

I just read your story for the first time, and may I say that it definately grabbed my attention and interest. I love the twist you have used involving Dumbledore and Tom Riddle. Ron has always been a prat and an oaf and he does not belong with Hermione - the thought is just ugg. Keep up the excellent writing and I hope that you update soon.

Another interesting chapter. I like how you've made the Slytherins very courtly and traditional, almost European in their mannerisms. :D

I do like the way you have Hermione playing her own game in the middle of theirs, as well as furthering this sort of reverse-plot scenario. Very sorry about Crooks, though it does provide a fair amount of information on Ron's character and what she could expect from him. More, when you are ready, please!