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What a great and long chapter. I like how Hermione is the focus of this story and her and Draco's relationship is just one of the many plots surrounding her. You have made Hermione really powerful and there are so many layers to this story that with every update I feel i need to start at the beginning again but i'm not complaining. Maybe one day when you've completed this story, i just may read the whole thing again.

oh i absolutely love this story! Really i do. I was so glad when you updated. I was thinking 'finally something worth reading!' lol

I loved the new chapter, keep up the good work. :]

As far as the hazelnut thing, in Irish myths they were eaten by a mystical salmon that you had to catch and eat, not the nuts themselves. And yeah, still liking it.

this is an awsome story... dont get discouraged about errors, i tried writing and i understand how hard it is lol.... if you decide you want a beta i have beta'd before but the author gave up on that story and i would gladly beta this for you.

I think this story is amazingly written, even if there are some grammatical errors, and a few spelling mistakes. This story is very enthralling, and very excellently detailed. I just recently found this story, and I'm biting at the grit for you to update!!! Marvelous story! Please continue soon!

I'm liking this version of the HPverse. In fact I think it might just be better than the original! Keep up the good work, looking forward to reading the rest.

ok so i really liked these last two chaps hermione and draco are really moving forward and i love that their magic bonded i have a thing for a protective draco he is sooo yummy like that... that potion seems cool and just wait samuel deserves and hermione is pretty strong isnt she if she can preform the coven magic by herself i will admit i do not know much about that but it sounds really cool... i love that hermione is accepted into knockturn alley i think that is really slytherin of her and i really liked that lucius escorted her i enjoy how you have written him in this and esp like voldie... i wonder what is happening with ron i am sure when draco sees him it will not be pretty i am also looking forward to the chap about them in the ministry and i love that draco wants hermione to be there but he still wants her safe and how sweet is he sitting next to her so she can sleep...

I have read a lotof fanfiction and I though I personaly love this story You leave me waiting for more. Thank you for keeping me guessing

7: Oh, wow! I really like this chapter and how they magically bonded. Though Theo, etc. walking in /is/ embarrassing. I really like Bella and Lucius. Looking forward to the next chapter! =D

So far I love, love, love this story! I can't wait to see where it goes. Finally, someone who writes Dumbledore the way I see him. I have always found Dumbledore's use and misuse of children for the "greater good," which is usually his own agenda, to be a slightly distasteful trait in the "noble" headmaster and always firmly believed that someone as smart as Hermione is billed to be and as intuitive as Harry can be, when he isn't blinded by his need to have people accept and care about him, they should have seen the problems with Dumbledore's omissions and half-truths. I think you have handled this beautifully. I also love the way you portray the Ron Weasley character, who is one of my least favorite in the books. I have always found him whiny, entitled, immature, irrational, selfish and an overall ass, pretty much exactly the way you have written him. Making it totally unbelievable to really imagine that a girl like Hermione would end up with him and not kill him at some point during the marriage. So I love the way your characters are written!