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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. There's not that many out there where Dumbledore is the bad guy. Cant wait for the next chapter! xx
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January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Really i don't think I can heap enough praise on this story without going overboard, so I felt that that one particular word summed it up quit nicely.
This truly has to be one of the best fanfics I have ever read. And I don't just mean in a Hermione/Draco sense, but in the fandom as a whole. The plot is absolutely wonderful! I happen to be a huge fan of Dumbledore being the bad guy, and an evil Ron to boot? It's like having chocolate sauce AND sprinkles on my ice cream, my EXTREME dislike for Ron can be rather overpowering, so I hope you mess him up real good!
I also enjoy the softer side of Slytherins. I've always liked that ensemble much more then the Order, and it's a pity more authors choose not to step out of canon and make these guys the good ones once in a while. And you've done at great job at that, not only making them likeable but giving believable backstories to their past actions was absolutely brilliant! You didn't just stick them out there, say they were the good guys and expect us to simply accept it. Every action was explained perfectly, and more important plausibly which is so rare a trait in many fanfics.
And thank you for not changing Hermione to much. While I admit to liking Pureblood Hermione stories, I find it rather annoying that when her glamour drops (if that particular plot is used) she's suddenly this gorgeously waif-like, extremely stacked, blue-eyed, blond haired Pureblood. So the fact that you didn't go in this direction is extremely refreshing.
I truly hope this story will be seen through to it's completion. I've come across so many wonderful stories that have been abandoned and sometimes the disappointment can be staggering. I pray that doesn't happen to this one, and look forward to more!
This truly has to be one of the best fanfics I have ever read. And I don't just mean in a Hermione/Draco sense, but in the fandom as a whole. The plot is absolutely wonderful! I happen to be a huge fan of Dumbledore being the bad guy, and an evil Ron to boot? It's like having chocolate sauce AND sprinkles on my ice cream, my EXTREME dislike for Ron can be rather overpowering, so I hope you mess him up real good!
I also enjoy the softer side of Slytherins. I've always liked that ensemble much more then the Order, and it's a pity more authors choose not to step out of canon and make these guys the good ones once in a while. And you've done at great job at that, not only making them likeable but giving believable backstories to their past actions was absolutely brilliant! You didn't just stick them out there, say they were the good guys and expect us to simply accept it. Every action was explained perfectly, and more important plausibly which is so rare a trait in many fanfics.
And thank you for not changing Hermione to much. While I admit to liking Pureblood Hermione stories, I find it rather annoying that when her glamour drops (if that particular plot is used) she's suddenly this gorgeously waif-like, extremely stacked, blue-eyed, blond haired Pureblood. So the fact that you didn't go in this direction is extremely refreshing.
I truly hope this story will be seen through to it's completion. I've come across so many wonderful stories that have been abandoned and sometimes the disappointment can be staggering. I pray that doesn't happen to this one, and look forward to more!
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Um, Just wanted to know if you were going to continue this--I liked it very much and was hoping you weren't going to abandon it?
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December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why no update?
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I, too, am glad for the update...I loved the training/dueling sequences. It seems your Hermione (like many others) is going to be a Fire Elemental. Interesting. :D
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow so they unlocked hermiones magic and now she is extremely powerful... very cool i liked the training room parts of this fic i liked that theo and draco had to realize that hermione was a partner to them not protect her although draco seems to have a nice mix of both... yaahhh lunas there i like that you actually have her in the story and not just a charactor she has her own personality and she has her own qualities that she brings to the group... i am sooo looking forward to the next chap i am looking forward to seeing what happens with ron esp...
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
8: I really like how you described the mock battles; just like a fluid dance! And elemental magic! How exciting! =D
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
my god that was a long chapter. but i loved it anyway. update soon.
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter! this story is fabulous keep up the good work =)
looking forward to your next update!
looking forward to your next update!
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hiya!!! i really love reading this story!!! with every new chapter this story gets deeper and deeper with more detail and twist and turns!
keep up the great work!!!
keep up the great work!!!