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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
magnifico! cant wait for your lemons im sure theyre gonna be awesome! what is sev gonna do when she realises he dugged her?? the wrath of the lioness is immanent! beautiful flow to your writing, the muse must be doing her happy dance!
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! Wow, I find I have to fan myself a bit after that scene. lol Looks like the tension is mounting. Found just one spelling errors (the part were Severus says he can't have his attendant passing out left and right when she's supposed to be doing his bidding. . it had by bidding instead of my bidding. If I'm wrong please forgive me.), but other than that it was excellent chapter. Keep up the excellent work and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this...keep it coming!!
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes you should continue writing please. I enjoy reading and would like to find out how this relationship unfolds. Thank you for the story.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading ur story but just havent commented on it
i really like it!
i really like it!
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! In my mind I could see the interaction Severus was having with those women, and I had to laugh. I enjoyed reading this chapter very much. Looks like Severus is going to be as stubborn as ever. lol I look forward to reading what will happen next. Keep up the excellent work.
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a fair story so far. Although your chapters are a little short. Oh, and begging for comments with the veiled suggestion that you might not continue because of the lack of them is lame.
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story so far, my dear! Do keep up the good work. And don't worry about reviews. While it's wonderful to recieve them, they aren't the most important thing abour writing. As long as YOU'RE satisfied, you needn't worry about others.
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally in love with this story already. Please, Please, Please keep going!!
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September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
don't be discouraged! youre doing great, you just gotta give the muse a fighting chance! im definately excited to see where you take this story, especially with the edition of the last chapter.youre keeping the characters believable and im really excited to see where you take them :D