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for Grieve

by Silverhair

person anniea
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more please and i really want vernon to get his for raping a 4 year old
person S.S
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
brilliant chapter can't wait for more
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is very interesting, I can't wait to read more!
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this so far. I like how you've started out. I wish I could give a more justifying review. I love how this is already. please add more when you can
Shigure-san
x chuu x
person Vex
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Someone needs to gut Vernon. Slowly. And then pet Harry, 'cause every one needs some soothing lovin'. xD
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're off to an interesting start. One thing you could try to improve on is your pace. Don't rush the plot/chapter. To me, this first chapter felt a little rushed. It was almost hard to keep up. But I mean that to be constructive, not just me bitching. I can't wait to see where you go with this. ;) Keep up the great work!

p.s. if you have an update email, can you add me?
person hytare
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i liked it!
when will fenrir appear??
person shadygrl
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor little Harry! D: I hope that he's not running toward more suffering.
person Viktoria
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
absolutely fantastic! I cant even imagine what will happen next!!!!
schedule September 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Looooove!!!