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I'm disappointed that YOU'RE just going to 'FORGIVE/FORGOT' thet damn traitious weslady family!! That's SO not GOOD WRITING..It's cliche and it's very, very disappoiting..I mean, c'mon..You did so well before NOW, you're just going to say, HEY, they were "POOR and MISUNDERSTOOD"..Its still NOT an EXCUSE and YOU'RE giving them one, in this timeline..WTF is that?? Paying them too..Haven't the fucked up family stolen ENOUGH from HP??

I mean, I don't believe there ISN'T another needy wizarding family out there that needs help..Her her is disgusting and I'm so revolted by this chapter.

Never crazy about Tonks. I'm surprise that Salazer Slytherin is ALIVE and is going to be with Becca??

You know..I have to say, I hate Sirius in this story and James, not so far behide. What an idiot..This has to be the first or second story that has me NOT liking Sirius and that's a VERY HARD thing to do..Unlikely, more like it.

I'm disgusted again by how you JUST 'FORGIVE/FORGET' when it comes to those traitors..Using the excuse of it being ANOTHER timeline is not ok and honestly, they would've eventually BETRAYED HP anyways, plus that knowitall whore!

I mean, do you LIKE them that MUCH to just 'LET' the damn family off! It's so fucked up!! I mean, WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU..This story is soooooooooooooo good, but just this FACT alone is..ARgh!!!

Why make them RICHER..I mean, do you have no MORALS when it comes to being BETRAYED and just forgiving..ARghhh!!!

Those fairies for some reason reminds me of 'Sleeping Beauty'?? The one that got her finger pricked, I think.

WHY ARE you giving PPL FREE UPBOOST to their powers??? That's just NOT right!! It's NOT THEIRS to keep..Argh..It's pissing me off.

WOW.. All this time and STILL*LOL* no little HP..I wonder what role he'll play, if there's going to be two extra sons of HP??

Are you actually going to take that LONG to write the BIRTH or whatever and WILL HP be rescued?? I sure hope so.

The pace of the story is a bit slow but still a good story..JUST PISSED off about that traitoius family and knowitall whore!

Wow, okay, I finally got caught up! I started reading this two weeks ago. I love this so much, and I've got to say that I'm really impressed. If it was me writing this I would probably have a million wandering story lines. I love the way you keep everything together and don't leave a question unanswered for long without a reason. :) I'm totally hooked and I can't wait to read more!

Always a captivating chapter or three since my last visit. I wish I was a true Fan-atic rather than just a casual reader and occasional reviewer. I hope that you continue to write despite the absence of continuous praise from those who read but don't always review or rate your story. The Third Time is a Charm holds a special place in my favorite stories/authors. Your in company with Josephine Darcey author of 'The Marriage Stone' a Harry Potter/Severus fan fiction and Terri Botta author of 'The Lucky Ones' an Inuyasha fan fiction. The quality of your storyline is epic in nature.

Thank you once again for writing and sharing your story.

great work as usual . i liked the chapter on harry and snapes counter parts im interested to find out what they plan on doing to help Becca ?