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February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Babies :) I can't wait to read more
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February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating, I so love this story.
But I think there is a little mistake in the last chapter or I understood it wrong. You wrote that Lillian war born on September 1st, but wouldn't it be more August 1st? Because there is no indication that a whole month has passed since the birth of little Harry, Neville and Evan. Or am I just misunderstanding it?
But I think there is a little mistake in the last chapter or I understood it wrong. You wrote that Lillian war born on September 1st, but wouldn't it be more August 1st? Because there is no indication that a whole month has passed since the birth of little Harry, Neville and Evan. Or am I just misunderstanding it?
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Keep up the wonderful storyline!
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell u jusr how excited I am that the baby is finally comeing and the story is moving along. I just love big long epics. I wish I could update as much as u do. I just really really realy love ur story and I am at the edge of my desk chair waiting for the next chapter to see what happens next. U are doing an amazing job.
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February 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cool!
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February 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love, love, LOVE this story!! It definitely gives me waff.
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, So glad you are better, missed this story, thanks:)
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February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I read this at last night, I was thinking *yeah, it's that good* about it and found out that you're BIAS when it comes to the damn traitorous weasly family. I mean, I'll GIVE you the examples!
First off, YOU, yourself, even STATED that, IN every universal/timeline, the family in ONE WAY or another has STOLEN, TAKE MONEY or something along the lines of HP inheritance, either by "MARRIAGE" or whatever and in the END, "THAT" family is ALWAYS about money somehow.. You even said that the other members of the WW society, no-matter whom it is, is the same, etc even Harry's damn autnt and uncle, YET, YOU have a DOUBLE STANDARD when it comes to this particular TRAITOROUS family..I mean, I don't get why you wrote it like that..I mean, I know you MUST really like the damn family if you're willing to write the CLICHE, FUCK-UP 'FORGIVE/FORGET' story device..Its just pathetic..Its contradicting to whatever you said in the beginning and along the way..I mean, Harry doesn't even have the backbone and GUTS to do something about it and JUST ups and say, oh, "I'll give them another chance" etc..Well, that damn beeca anyways.. That's so not GOOD writing there and honestly, Harry should've SAID NO, but you make him so weak when it comes to his foes!!!
You're GIVING HP'Z MONEY away to that damn family without REASON!! THIS IS ONE MAJOR bias/FAVORITISM that is just outright staggering and shitty!!
WHAT's WRONG with you?? I mean, do you find being BETRAYED ok and just forgive and forget and PLeASE, don't use the SAME exuse OVER and OVER about it NOT being the SAME family etc, becuz IN EVERY time line, it's the same..STOLEN or USED or DIES HP and then the money is STOLEN or USED by that family..I don't see how this particular timeline is ANY DIFFERENT just becuz one again, HP GIVE HIS MONEY away to that family, so they COULD STAY LOYAL?? WHAT kind does that say about that particular family..NOMATTER if it's NOT the SAME family, they've ALWAYS had the INTENTION, THIS is WHAT YOU'RE NOT GETTING!! It's not write..I mean, at least the MALFOYS and REG BLACK are doing everything for THEIR FAMILY/CHILDREN and MOTHER ETC, not MONEY!! I don't see what they've done wrong..
That family TOOK ADVANTAGE of an ORPHAN and I DON'T see how you can just use the cliche 'forgive/forget' plot device..It's honestly stupid and this IS ONE of the MAJOR disapointments to this wonderful story..Its so refreshingly different..
Well, the other thing I'm pissed at is, the whole power boost..It's like STOLEN power from HP/Severus..Not theirs to take and I don't know if I'm seeing a trend or whatever when it comes to this story but, Taking or stealing in whatever form is NOT ok!
I just wanted to give you a DETAIL explanation as to what I think of this story so far; and WHY?!
Sincerely,
First off, YOU, yourself, even STATED that, IN every universal/timeline, the family in ONE WAY or another has STOLEN, TAKE MONEY or something along the lines of HP inheritance, either by "MARRIAGE" or whatever and in the END, "THAT" family is ALWAYS about money somehow.. You even said that the other members of the WW society, no-matter whom it is, is the same, etc even Harry's damn autnt and uncle, YET, YOU have a DOUBLE STANDARD when it comes to this particular TRAITOROUS family..I mean, I don't get why you wrote it like that..I mean, I know you MUST really like the damn family if you're willing to write the CLICHE, FUCK-UP 'FORGIVE/FORGET' story device..Its just pathetic..Its contradicting to whatever you said in the beginning and along the way..I mean, Harry doesn't even have the backbone and GUTS to do something about it and JUST ups and say, oh, "I'll give them another chance" etc..Well, that damn beeca anyways.. That's so not GOOD writing there and honestly, Harry should've SAID NO, but you make him so weak when it comes to his foes!!!
You're GIVING HP'Z MONEY away to that damn family without REASON!! THIS IS ONE MAJOR bias/FAVORITISM that is just outright staggering and shitty!!
WHAT's WRONG with you?? I mean, do you find being BETRAYED ok and just forgive and forget and PLeASE, don't use the SAME exuse OVER and OVER about it NOT being the SAME family etc, becuz IN EVERY time line, it's the same..STOLEN or USED or DIES HP and then the money is STOLEN or USED by that family..I don't see how this particular timeline is ANY DIFFERENT just becuz one again, HP GIVE HIS MONEY away to that family, so they COULD STAY LOYAL?? WHAT kind does that say about that particular family..NOMATTER if it's NOT the SAME family, they've ALWAYS had the INTENTION, THIS is WHAT YOU'RE NOT GETTING!! It's not write..I mean, at least the MALFOYS and REG BLACK are doing everything for THEIR FAMILY/CHILDREN and MOTHER ETC, not MONEY!! I don't see what they've done wrong..
That family TOOK ADVANTAGE of an ORPHAN and I DON'T see how you can just use the cliche 'forgive/forget' plot device..It's honestly stupid and this IS ONE of the MAJOR disapointments to this wonderful story..Its so refreshingly different..
Well, the other thing I'm pissed at is, the whole power boost..It's like STOLEN power from HP/Severus..Not theirs to take and I don't know if I'm seeing a trend or whatever when it comes to this story but, Taking or stealing in whatever form is NOT ok!
I just wanted to give you a DETAIL explanation as to what I think of this story so far; and WHY?!
Sincerely,
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! The first chapter is indeed interesting..Very good.
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say..I am speechless..This story is amazing..!! Why do you abandon it..My god, it's sooo good!